literature

Loss Over Love

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Literature Text

Why do you do this,

Do this to me?

I just can't handle it

Can't you see?


I'm torn,

I'm broken,

I'm over and through,

Because of what you do.


You love to play your games,

It's apperent and true,

But they leave me so unwanted,

So out of the blue.


Is there no escape,

No easy way out?

I think there is,

I'll figure it out.


With the knife in my hand,

And the blade in my heart,

I'll end my life here,

And begin a new start.

This is really badly done, but I wanted to upload SOMETHING here. -.-'

I did it in the hospital, but they wern't to happy with it... Oh well.

And is this even the right category? I dunno where to put it under...
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Auraexodus's avatar
who cares, express yourself

it's who you are, and if you're not satisfied with it's intent, refocus it to be sharper

i find if i hang on to one concept and just...let it all out over that one thing that burns me the most i can drive out alot of pain into something ive written.

something externalized

dont let inexperience phase you